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Pooduckian 25-Oct-09 02:07:05	I see you in the endless sea, Shining back in my dreams, oh dear lady. Come, come to reality with me. I wish to smell you in all your savagery, To see your motion displayed properly, To hear the life pouring trough your body. I cannot abide figments no longer, Dreams softer than air, tasteless forever. I want, oh how I want to touch in clarity. So, unhide yourself dear lady, Let me see you in all your solid glory, No lies, no deception, just you and me. I have been really neglecting my published poems. Some certainly could use some work and editing.
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Caber		#1	[url]	[-]
27-Oct-09 06:47:41 The Thinking Woman's Crumpet	Now that was a really nice ode to beer. You are talking about a nice cold beer right? right?
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Zixinus		#2	[url]	[-]
Pooduckian 27-Oct-09 20:06:28	Now that was a really nice ode to beer. You are talking about a nice cold beer right? right? I wish.
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Puddleduckian 29-Oct-09 22:14:07	Mmm been there done that if it's a dream woman. Waking up feeling so frustrated that you'll never have her... could drive a man to insanity. Or to the pen. -------------------- Why should I trust what I have never called mine? "Love is supposed to heal, But I've had too much pain. So love is, To me, Just another, Memory." - Kheldar Blackmane
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Caber		#4	[url]	[-]
30-Oct-09 01:19:32 The Thinking Woman's Crumpet	Blackmane wrote: Mmm been there done that if it's a dream woman. Waking up feeling so frustrated that you'll never have her... could drive a man to insanity. Or to the pen. or to the bottle.
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Zixinus		#5	[url]	[-]
Pooduckian 31-Oct-09 21:05:51	Personally, I would rather wish it to go to the closest club, finding suitable girl, finding out that sex and the whole relationship thing is overrated, get frustrated with each other and leave with life experiences. Somewhat of a broken heart with that, I know, but at least then I would get over it. Sadly, or perhaps happily, I do not feel that I want to have such a relationship. Nor any kind of relationship, as I don't feel even remotely having any kind of socializing. Funnily enough, my dream girl is what I privately write about in my notes, then she transforms from one idea and from to another, way faster than I can introduce myself to her. What's even funnier is that this poem came randomly. I just started typing and this came out. Critiques are appreciated. Last Edited By: Zixinus 31-Oct-09 21:10:28. Edited 1 time.
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Blackmane		#6	[url]	[-]
Puddleduckian 3-Nov-09 13:30:51	As i said, it sounded exactly like what you said it was - a dream woman. I just didn't catch the changing bit if you put it in. A fair piece if I might say. -------------------- Why should I trust what I have never called mine? "Love is supposed to heal, But I've had too much pain. So love is, To me, Just another, Memory." - Kheldar Blackmane
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