It should be noted that by the end of the Third Bit, I had no idea how the story was going to end, so for the first, and definitely the last, time, I had the readers at the time vote on how it should end, and ended it that way.
Again, thankyou to Devyn (aka Richard) for helping me out on the script formatting (although any errors are, of course attributable to the fact I ignored some of it , and also the foibles of forum posting)
The Parisian café is the Café de Flore by V1ND1CARE at MTS2.
For the new posting of the story here, I've added a small bit at the end (or will, when it's done).
The First Bit
The Second Bit
The Third Bit
The Fourth Bit
The Last Bit
Coming soon: Where Are They Now?